ext_16646 ([identity profile] astra2104.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] janie_tangerine 2008-07-22 06:09 pm (UTC)

That was so sensual in every possible way, the dress, the food, them touching each other - delicately written, really poetic.

And I couldn't tell at all that you've never written this pairing before; it made perfect sense and you've both of them down perfectly :)

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