ext_61611 ([identity profile] elliotsmelliot.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] janie_tangerine 2008-04-13 01:34 am (UTC)

I really like this idea of Jack and Sayid on a road trip to nowhere. I enjoyed the whole story and how you divided it into chapters connected to the songs. This final exchange really made the story.

“At the beginning I hated it.”

“And right now?”

“Right now I could not imagine anything else to listen to when I drive.”

Jack lets out a small laugh, it doesn’t happen often; Sayid does too, and it happens even less often.

It’s warm inside the car, the sun light hitting them from the front.

Jack feels as one with Sayid and he knows that it has to be the same for him. It won’t be long.


Great work!


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