ext_61611 ([identity profile] elliotsmelliot.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] janie_tangerine 2008-07-12 01:45 pm (UTC)

The first one was so sweet. It's cliché for everyone to become wise automatically once their dead, so I found it really poignant that Shannon and Boone had to work a little bit before they realize all their old habit were a waste of time. I think Arzt still needs to learn this too. I loved how he got all bossy because he was left out of the BFF club.

So because of the first fic, I totally imagined Shannon and Boone checking out the card game and their favourite player. I like how Jack goes to seek out his triangle partner for a bit of a break and how you can read whatever you want out that.

Great and fast work!

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