Ah sniff. This is almost over. I love what you added to this section. There is a new tenderness to their interactions that I think really works as a great reminder of where they’ve been and where their going.
They get off the train maybe three or four hours later; they don’t say anything in that frame of time even if their hands hadn’t really moved, but it’s fine enough. Jack figures that sometimes silence speaks for itself; it feels like something has shifted within them, but it’s a positive shift.
I really like this passage. It’s the type of gesture you could pretend to ignore as you are trying to figure it out.
The cries of Waaaaallllllttt never get old! And yay for the Desmond/Penny reunion. I love how she pushed her way through the crowd.
I liked the addition of Gabriella! You did a great job describing the dancing. You could just imaging all the toe tapping fun. Good luck wrapping up your edits on the last part. Congratulations on getting through this challenging chapter. Sometimes it just takes 13 parts to get to where you’re going!
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They get off the train maybe three or four hours later; they don’t say anything in that frame of time even if their hands hadn’t really moved, but it’s fine enough. Jack figures that sometimes silence speaks for itself; it feels like something has shifted within them, but it’s a positive shift.
I really like this passage. It’s the type of gesture you could pretend to ignore as you are trying to figure it out.
The cries of Waaaaallllllttt never get old! And yay for the Desmond/Penny reunion. I love how she pushed her way through the crowd.
I liked the addition of Gabriella! You did a great job describing the dancing. You could just imaging all the toe tapping fun. Good luck wrapping up your edits on the last part. Congratulations on getting through this challenging chapter. Sometimes it just takes 13 parts to get to where you’re going!