http://suerum.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] suerum.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] janie_tangerine 2009-10-17 06:13 am (UTC)

Amazing

You are a wonderful, lyrical writer! I read a LOT of fan fiction, not much Supernatural admittedly, but this is in the upper tiers of it all, no doubt. This was so lovely...You wrapped it up in truth, being human, being divine, mortality and the place that pesky, sexual drive fits in with it all...Reproduction? Well, maybe but it seems like since that wasn't an option for the guys it must also be about pleasure, intimacy, being alive and you captured all that and more. Hey, think what you did-you drew a perfect portrait of an angel doing something they should never do...have sex. You did it all with grace, with elegance, with wonderful imagery. Thanks for this story. There was so much good writing in this but I particularly liked this:He throws his arms behind Dean’s neck and brings him down in a kiss which is frantic and messy and all wetness and wrong angles but that feels just right.

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