OOOH WOW THIS IS SO GOOD. It was so short but it packed so much, I just love how everything comes through so clearly even with no dialogue. And duh, it might be PG13 but some bits were indeed sexy (IE, the last line of paragraph two. God. Yes. THAT). And that last paragraph was just fantastic, as the whole thing is but the conclusion just hits the spot. H/C like this, I totally approve of. <333 Thank you so much, I absolutely loved it!!!!!!! <3333 *re-reads*