Ouuch sorry for the lateness answering - let's say I ended up having to write 20000 words in three days and I didn't manage to catch up with comments until now. /fail
That said thank you so very much for reading! And don't worry about coherency, it's totally overrated. ;) I'm so glad that this worked for you, especially because both format/content aren't my usual style. Especially it's great to know the introduction of the facts worked for you because I was worried about being too cryptic, but I just figured that since my POV wasn't much aware I couldn't go for a detailed backstory. (And regarding the book, I just took the basic premise - guy being the last man on Earth except for other-human-beings that in there are a genetically engineered improved version - but in case you read it, I didn't really spoil you. ;) ) Also I was totally aiming for the vessels thing to be creepy so it's pretty good to know I delivered on that. And really I'm -so- glad that you liked this one.
Also you mean timestamps for the back story? I haven't thought about it but when I'm not swamped with challenge fics I could give your passive-aggressive suggestion a try - I also might have liked writing this way too much. I'll totally think about it though. ;) thanks so very much again! ♥
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That said thank you so very much for reading! And don't worry about coherency, it's totally overrated. ;) I'm so glad that this worked for you, especially because both format/content aren't my usual style. Especially it's great to know the introduction of the facts worked for you because I was worried about being too cryptic, but I just figured that since my POV wasn't much aware I couldn't go for a detailed backstory. (And regarding the book, I just took the basic premise - guy being the last man on Earth except for other-human-beings that in there are a genetically engineered improved version - but in case you read it, I didn't really spoil you. ;) ) Also I was totally aiming for the vessels thing to be creepy so it's pretty good to know I delivered on that. And really I'm -so- glad that you liked this one.
Also you mean timestamps for the back story? I haven't thought about it but when I'm not swamped with challenge fics I could give your passive-aggressive suggestion a try - I also might have liked writing this way too much. I'll totally think about it though. ;) thanks so very much again! ♥