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2011-11-10 10:47 pm (UTC)
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I think my heart completely broke at this line:
It doesn’t feel like Jimmy’s hand at all.
Amelia's grief---her trying to let go while something is still wearing her husband's body around the house---is so potent in this. I wish I could describe it more coherently, but: you've really written something powerful here.
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It doesn’t feel like Jimmy’s hand at all.
Amelia's grief---her trying to let go while something is still wearing her husband's body around the house---is so potent in this. I wish I could describe it more coherently, but: you've really written something powerful here.