I love #6! He smiles more than Sayid but he's not necessarily anymore happy which you point out well in the fic to follow. I could just see Sawyer explaining to someone, maybe Boone, about how this edge of darkness stuff works. He might even reference Bruce. Of course this could never happen in real life because your heart would explode, however...this just felt right. Great observations about everyone, especially Kate. The idea that she is trying to get out of the shadows is very apt but once she is there, is not so comfortable really hit home for me. I also like the idea that 'the Koreans' also dance on the edge. This was excellent work!
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Date: 2008-07-07 11:54 am (UTC)