it'd be my first try at the pairing so please go easy on me
This looks good for a 50th try, so, you know, no worries there.
I like the way you used the lyrics, and found them very fitting for these two and what you were saying. This is very much about them being in love with other people as well as being together and I love that about this pairing.
Wonderful fic! Thank you so, so much for writing it for me!!!
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Date: 2008-07-18 09:22 pm (UTC)This looks good for a 50th try, so, you know, no worries there.
I like the way you used the lyrics, and found them very fitting for these two and what you were saying. This is very much about them being in love with other people as well as being together and I love that about this pairing.
Wonderful fic! Thank you so, so much for writing it for me!!!