Hee! I agree with lenina, this was the best date ever. I liked how you used this simple outing to demonstrate how uneasy Sawyer is with change, whether it is pancakes or movie sequels. I also loved how Hurley desperately wants everything to be normal. One of my favourite things about your stories is that even if it focuses on one or two people, you always let us know where everyone is and usually in your hands, everyone is doing good - eating pancakes and coffee ice cream!
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Date: 2008-07-31 12:46 am (UTC)