I LOVE this concept in general, but you elevated it even higher with the fantastic writing. The shifts between POV were so spot-on and totally IC; everything felt completely organic and so true to character. And Jack and Shannon's conversation -- so great. Wonderful job!
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Date: 2009-06-07 05:15 pm (UTC)