Oooooh, I love your interpretation of Richard here, and his role in what's going on. And your Jacob! *hearts* Mysterious and ambiguous and totally intriguing.
Oh! And the ending -- There's time, he thinks as his hands' grip on the white cloth of Jacob's shirt gets a bit too tight, and he doesn't pay a thought to the blood staining it. There's time, and if it ends the right way, there always will be. -- just incredible. Hits all the perfect notes.
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Date: 2009-07-13 01:57 pm (UTC)Oh! And the ending -- There's time, he thinks as his hands' grip on the white cloth of Jacob's shirt gets a bit too tight, and he doesn't pay a thought to the blood staining it. There's time, and if it ends the right way, there always will be. -- just incredible. Hits all the perfect notes.