I loved this, it was amazing, the original was one of my favorites too, but i love some of the changes you added, especially the last line with Esau pretending he's not jealous, in my mind Richard and Jacob get back to a good place after and prover Esau wrong
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Date: 2010-05-08 04:49 am (UTC)